day tripper

Hi! Sorry this took a while - I've been pounded with HS PSAT studying and sports. /: I was clueless back then. I can’t believe I did half the things ...

Hola! Walking down the cold street towards an empty wooden bench overlooking a cold, seemingly lifeless lake, and without the ferryman Charon to lead the way, Jesse couldn't fight off ...

Hi! I'm Olivia! If my review seems kind of 'woo!' and I tend to scare you - its just because I'm super hyper (it's my birthday) So! Here we go. ...

Hiya! I saw this had 0 reviews, so I've stepped up to the plate(: Kyle was in the hot line lunch in the cafeteria when Lana pushed up behind him. ...

Hey Lucy. Like you asked; I'll review(: Quietly Rosaline put her pen... Coma after Quietly. I couldn't really find the other thing that I was supposed to catch. Ha, I ...

PEYTONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN;D I think this is the first time out of our like... 2 month internet friendship I'm reviewing something for you. WOW I feel like a crappy friend. bahahahaha anywho

Hiya, I'm back [ again ] and as requested, I will review your story!(: “Come on Rosaline, we’re going to be late!” Rosetta called up the staircase to her twin ...

IM BACK! Miss me?(; It had been exactly 42 hours since Hope’s first encounter with Pretty-boy, or Jeffrey as she know knew him, and she had been avoiding him at ...

HIYA AGAIN! Okay, let's get started! They certainly were not like what she had felt for Raymond-or, Ray Ray as she had affectionately called him. No need for that last ...

Hiya, Beauty and the Fish! I'm Olivia(: Anyways, here's my review: When Hope finally finished her relentless mourning, she pulled herself up slowly so that she could look out the ...

Wow Kat. Just-wow. Kat says: I reviewed a story when I first woke up; I check YWS first thing in the morning and read the PM that Heather sent me, ...

Well, I'm confused. This is a prologue, so will the chapters explain what got them to that point, or will they explain what happens after this point. Making me have ...

Im not sure about this. I can't really say I liked it, but I can't really say I dis-liked it. I think the problem was that the Chapter's story line ...

Well, this was mismatched to me. This is a short story, yes, but that doesnt mean it has to be SHORT. You know? This definitly needs more detail and explanation. ...

The energy and perspective in this was amazing. Possibly because I feel the exact, exact, exact, EXACT same way.(: I think this is one of those stories where you have ...